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Epic? Almost

The song is very good, especially in the intro, but the transition to the bass wasn't too good.
Something to get your song progressing is pads.
Pads get your song to move through melodies fairly easy, also at 2:30, it starts getting good right there, but it felt like it needed some bass to go with it, but it gets a bit repetitive...To fix that use the melody you were using but copy it and change a few notes ever 4 or so beats in the melody.
Also some other synths amd such playing at the same time with the leads would make it sound even better, for ex. putting a 3xosc saw or a piano during 2:20 would also add to the background tokeep it from being repetitive.

You got a nice buildup though.
I hope you use this advice in the future :D

P.S. Sorry if this was a bit harsh (in return you are 5'ed)

vvvvvWhat that guy below me said!vvvvv

What AckBomber said.

Very good, nice tempo.

I like the speed and intensity in this song, I am going to be using this in an animation of mine, but im gonna go ahead and look at ur other songs too to see which one would be better.
Good work!

Oooooo! Top 5!

I think you've did such an awesome job at this song!
I have a feeling this will be top 5!

5/5 10/10

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Thanks, yeah a put a fair bit of effort into it although I think I'm going to have to redo a few things. Personally I think the lead at the end sounds a little bit off tune and doesn't sound right, the bass is definitely too loud, kick = too quiet.

Wow! Top 5, I'd be so happy if that happened.
Thanks for the high score and review Zooloo,

Brando

Top 5!

I bet later on this week I will se this song on the top 5 XD
Keep making more music like this!
Oh and i 5 bombed this! So good!
Also Trancik doesn't know what real music is at all...ignore that noob.

Oh man this went far!

I've been listening to your songs since 06 when the AP was really basic!
You went really far!
You inspired me to make music.
I like your old songs "Sunlight" Make more songs like that please!

Good in every way!

Im loving this!
But I would make the kick in the beginning not have as much of a punch, but after the intro the punchy kick matches well in the song.

When you finish the song i would love for it if you tell me when it's finished!

JPLaro responds:

I will tell you

Ok thanks for the advice!

Wow!

MrMilkCarton told me about you and he said you got signed, I can see why!

Wooh! Thats some awesome Trance!

So MrMilkCarton taught you too?
He's teaching me also!

I like this song alot!

Favorited!!!

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